Talk:Ecclesiastical prison/GA1
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Reviewer: PizzaKing13 (talk · contribs) 21:11, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this article. PizzaKing13 ¡Hablame! 21:11, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- "prisoners might be held" → "prisoners might have been held"
Monastic prisons[edit]
- "famously" → "notably"
- Explain what the case of Nun of Watton was
- "might be" → "could have been"
- What does "detrusio in monasterium" translate to?
- "punishment, though, monasteries" → "punishment, however, monasteries"
- "could be for periods" → "could have been for periods"
- "could last" → "could have lasted"
- "Vade in pace" should be lowercase
- Remove the comma after "Salamanca"
Diocesan prisons[edit]
- Why are the prisons of Notre Dame and the Archbishop of Canterbury notable?
- Remove "famous"
- Move "from 1367 to 1870" to after "served as a papal prison"
- Use endashes for the year spans listed: (1539–1540) (periods 1592–1600) (1773–1775) (c. 1789–1795)
- Include an image of Pope Paul III (or one of the other people imprisoned) with an appropriate caption about his imprisonment to better illustrate the article.
- Why were prisoners sent to San Michele a Ripa by their parents or guardians?
Inquisitorial prisons[edit]
- "process could take years" → "process could have taken years"
- "could subject" → "could have subjected"
- Replace the semicolon after "no prisons of their own to use" with a period
- What does "strictissimus carceris" translate to?
- "On the other hand" → "Conversely" MOS:EUPHEMISM
- "might be allowed" → "might have been allowed"
- "might be freed" → "might have been freed"
- "could sometimes escape" → "could sometimes have escaped"
- Specify "King Philip IV of France"
- Replace the semicolon after "southern France" with a period
- "These reforms, once implemented, left inquisitorial prisons among the best-run in Europe" this is subjective. Specify that this was the opinion of Edward M. Peters.
Modern era[edit]
- Remove (in 1874) from the parenthesis and move it to after "monument historique"
- put "monument historique" into the {{lang|fr|monument historique}} template
- "During the course of the early modern era" → "During the early modern era"
- "between the Vatican and Francisco Franco" change it to "between Pope Pius XII and Francisco Franco" or to "between the Vatican and Spain (linked to Francoist Spain)"
- Add "Law" to the portal template under the See also header
Overall[edit]
- Neutral
- Focused and broad
- No war edits
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
- @Moriwen: I've left some comments for the review. PizzaKing13 ¡Hablame! 21:53, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you so much!! This is all helpful; I'll get on making some edits. — Moriwen (talk) 14:25, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
- @Moriwen: Status? PizzaKing13 ¡Hablame! 03:52, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
- Life hit hard. Giving it another go, lol.— Moriwen (talk) 14:03, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
- OK, revisions made! Thank you for your patience.— Moriwen (talk) 16:18, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
- @Moriwen: Everything looks good. I'll go ahead and pass this article. PizzaKing13 ¡Hablame! 05:29, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Moriwen: Status? PizzaKing13 ¡Hablame! 03:52, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you so much!! This is all helpful; I'll get on making some edits. — Moriwen (talk) 14:25, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
Status query[edit]
PizzaKing13, Moriwen, where does this review stand? What's left to be done? Thank you very much. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:21, 11 September 2023 (UTC)