Talk:Herbert Salvatierra/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:15, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

One copy change. Check an Atlas Electoral link. This article is just this side of a GA. Won't take you long, Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:15, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

• the National Convergence (CN) alliance, a grouping that, in Pando, was led, among others, by Roger Pinto Holy, comma, cake! Can you rephrase this sentence to require less punctuation?
  • Jeez that is a mouthful. How does ... alliance, a grouping that, in Pando, was led by Roger Pinto and Leopoldo Fernández, among others. sound? I could further shorten it if you'd like. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 17:35, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

  That's fine. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:15, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks

Earwig found no issues (highest percentage 2.9 percent).

Four sources were checked for spot checks:

• 6: El gobierno encarceló al prefecto pandino L. Fernández Y
• 12: En representación del Alcalde, el Secretario de Desarrollo Económico Herbert Salvatierra Y
• 16: Not finding the percentage here. Is this the right Atlas link?
  • Wrong link, sorry. It should now link to the national results, where you can either click on the district or scroll down to a table containing the results. Unfortunately, this section of the site doesn't let me link directly to individual district races. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 17:35, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
• 17: CID percentage of 19.45% Y

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