Talk:Maurice (emperor)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• The Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded... suggest:

  Under him the Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded...

• He may have been a Cappadocian Greek,[3][4] or a Hellenised Armenian.[5] The issue cannot be resolved. suggest:

  Sources conflict over his birthplace, with some calling him a Cappadocian Greek, others a Hellenised Armenian; The historian Evagrius Scholasticus records a probably invented descent from old Rome.

• In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which was shortly to kill him suggest:

  In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which shortly thereafter killed him.

• @Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:08, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: Much better. Thanks. Assessing three GANs in 48 hours. That has to be some sort of record! That is, I nominated the first of the three less than 48 hours ago. Maurice took you less than 5 hours. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)