Talk:Michael Boulding/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. The article is very good, but here are some other suggestions for improvement:
- How do you feel about merging the early life section into the personal life sections, since they are both relatively short?
- This may just be because I am an American, but the phrase "as a schoolboy" seems incredibly informal. "...while he was in school" or something would be better.
That's it! Excellent work. :) Nikki311 00:17, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Pass. That may have been the easiest and fastest GA review I've ever done. :) Nikki311 17:36, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Hi, I would like to make the change of Michaels Birth place from Manchester, to Sheffield. He was born in Sheffield not Manchester, and has never even lived in Manchester but im not sure how to edit it on his profile.(Maryb90 (talk) 11:39, 2 April 2012 (UTC))