Talk:Pace Brantley Preparatory School

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Update the name of the school[edit]

Pace Brantley is now Pace Brantley Preparatory School for preparing children who learn differently for today's modern world (2023 and beyond!) EricEdwardWilson714 (talk) 13:31, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Cleaning up article's multiple issues[edit]

This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it. Please introduce links to this page from related articles; try the Find link tool for suggestions. (June 2016)

I have updated and cleaned this up

This article relies excessively on references to primary sources. (January 2010)

I have updated references to primary sources within Wiki for more information about the topic.

This article uses bare URLs, which are uninformative and vulnerable to link rot. (August 2022)

I have removed the automated links to bare URLS and made sure the article did not read like an advertisement.

Please advise and remove theses issues if they meet the requirements.

Thank you,

Eric EricEdwardWilson714 (talk) 16:09, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You have misunderstood the meanings of all of these warnings. Click on the links inside the warnings for explanations. MrOllie (talk) 16:15, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I have clicked on all the links suggested inside the warnings for explanations and got lost in the weeds with more links to 'read more' about. EricEdwardWilson714 (talk) 16:17, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The biggest issue is that the article reads like a promotional brochure for the school, and now only has a single source, the school itself. The main purpose of a Wikipedia article about an organization is to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization. We don't want to know what the school considers to be notable about itself, we want to know what those completely unaffiliated with it consider important/significant/influential about it. 331dot (talk) 16:47, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This is an amazing insight, thank you very much. I will tell the school what you have mentioned and see how I can help them. Thank you. EricEdwardWilson714 (talk) 16:48, 20 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]