Talk:Rainivoninahitriniony

Rainivoninahitriniony was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (September 12, 2015). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-class status:
Referencing and citation: criterion not met Coverage and accuracy: criterion not met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion not met Supporting materials: criterion not met

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Rainivoninahitriniony/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 17:01, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Many issues, some listed below:

First two sections Unreferenced.
Last fact needs a citation
Paragraph in lead should be split
Instead of mentioning his name in the article, just use "he".
Add isbns or oclcs to the first two sources.
More sources?

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:01, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Thanks for reviewing this. I hope to get to these changes today. - Lemurbaby (talk) 10:58, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies, real life took over. I've been away from home for a work related training. I should have time for getting these done on Sunday 8/23. Thanks for your patience. - Lemurbaby (talk) 11:08, 22 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Lemurbaby: Are you OK with me failing this for now until you get some time to work on it later? After that you can resubmit it for another review, and I'll come right back and pick it up.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:10, 31 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tomandjerry211 (alt), Lemurbaby hasn't edited on Wikipedia since the above post from August 22, now three weeks ago. It's probably time for you to fail it; Lemurbaby can always renominate after returning and addressing the issues you raised above. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:18, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]