Talk:Royal Philharmonic Orchestra/GA1
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Reviewer: Eric Corbett (talk · contribs) 17:11, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
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"The Royal Philharmonic Orchestra (RPO) is an orchestra based in London. It was formed in 1946 by Sir Thomas Beecham."
"The orchestra ... is an orchestra" is one of my pet peeves. Could we not give the reader the benefit of the doubt and simply say that "The Royal Philharmonic Orchestra (RPO), based in London, was formed by Sir Thomas Beecham in 1946"?- Quite happy with that, if you wish to change it. On the whole I agree with you. I must look at my other recent orchestra GAs (LSO and BBC SO) and see if they need the same treatment. Tim riley (talk) 20:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
"... making film soundtracks and numerous gramophone recordings"
"Gramaphone recordings" sounds rather quaintly period.- Not to one who buys Gramophone every month. We are going back through eight decades, remember. The RPO's earliest records came out on 78, as EMI was slow off the mark in launching LPs. Tim riley (talk) 20:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
Beecham's orchestra
"... comprised the Magic Flute Overture"
Why is "Overture" capitalised?
"... Haydn's Military Symphony"
Why is "Military" in italics?- That's its nickname. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music#Classical music titles Tim riley (talk) 20:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
1961–2000
"... Beethoven's Emperor Concerto
Isn't it popularly known as the Emperor Concerto rather than the Emperor?
21st century
"In 2010–11 and two subsequent seasons the RPO was invited to give a series of concerts in Montreux, Switzerland."
But did they take up the invitations?
Recordings
"After Beecham's death the orchestra made many recordings for Decca, sometimes under pseudonyms such as the "Beecham Symphony Orchestra", the "London Festival Orchestra" and the "Metropolitan Symphony Orchestra"
Why did they use pseudonyms?
"Recordings available on the RPO label in 2013 ranged from core symphonic repertoire and Tchaikovsky ballet scores ..."
Seems odd to use that past tense here as we're still in 2013.- I think it better to use the past tense in an encyclopaedia article. The present tense sticks out almost as badly there as it does in formal minutes of meetings. I stick to the past tense whenever I can. Most encylopaedias do, I think. The MoS (WP:DATED) expresses no view. Tim riley (talk) 20:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- As we're just discussing details that have no bearing on the GA criteria I think we can close this now. Nice article. Eric Corbett 21:29, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.