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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:29, 27 August 2011 (UTC)

Ixtonton[edit]

Created by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 23:06, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

date, length, referencing fine, offline AGF from an expert on the subject, same for copyvio/pl. But I don't find the hook statements easily in the article. I would prefer ALT1, but recommend to have one general remark on looting in History, with a date. For the original hook: there should be a ref for the statement right after the mentioning, + it says "most important", not "most powerful", - not essentially different, but harder to find. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:37, 26 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I've tweaked the first hook to reflect the wording in the article intro, and copied the cite in straight after it. I've also copied the discovery/looting into the history section as suggested. BTW, most of the refs are online and hyperlinked from the title in the references section - but most are in Spanish. Best regards, Simon Burchell (talk) 11:59, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
thank you, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:30, 27 August 2011 (UTC)