User talk:Jwright123

This user is a student editor in University_of_Utah/Japanese_Empire_to_Korean_Wave:_Pop_Culture_in_Motion_(Fall_2019) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:13, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, this is Chris Zhou from your Japanese pop culture class, I have peer reviewed your rough draft on 2002 world cup, here is my comment: A great statistical-data-supported content. The proposal ideas are great but seem to have extensive information and data to gather, it might be difficult and challenging to seek an answer or an evidence for every question you proposed, However, it is a great section to expand on and will definitely make the overall article more accurate and informative. It will cost a lot of effort to search for the information but it is definitely worth a try. The sources are perfectly credible and reliable, and the citations have been made well. Great job,looking forward to seeing your further edits! Chriszhouzzl97 (talk) 04:53, 9 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Chris! Thanks for your feedback! It is a bit tricky finding all the statistical information, but I thought that this would be better than some subjective economic observations for a wikipedia article... So, we will see how it goes I guess! Thanks for your feedback and good luck with your article!

Peer Review[edit]

Hi, this is Jade. I like what you have so far in your rough draft, I think the information you have will help improve the quality of the article. However, it would be beneficial to find more sources (the sources you have so far are good, but I still feel like having more would help) and lengthen what you want to add to the Japan section of the article since it's rather short compared to what you plan to contribute to the Korea section. There's also some inconsistency with how you abbreviate United States, but that's an easy fix. U1056662 (talk) 05:27, 9 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jade! Thanks for your feedback! I agree that adding more information to the Japan section would help. I have had some issues with finding similar information for Japan, so I will just have to include the best information that I can find. I will check on how I abbreviate the United States, thanks for the heads up!