User talk:Kelmalc
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Hello, Kelmalc, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:11, 31 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Hi Kelmalc! You contributed well to this article. The context added in the introduction, defining racial profiling, and the increased identities targeted by racial profiling are all useful. THe information added to the different countries, specifically Germany and Israel, was very helpful. However, I question why you took away the criticism in the section of racial profiling in Israel. Israel has been heavily criticized for the the racist practices used in the Ben Gurion airport through racial profiling of Palestinians and Arab/Muslim looking peoples. I would recommend adding that criticism back into the article. Jdevin07 (talk) 03:03, 14 March 2017 (UTC)