Wikipedia:Peer review/Denmark/archive1
Denmark[edit]
This article is currently chosen as the article improvement drive article of the week. Inspiration for what needs to be done in order for the article to become a featured article would be helpful. --Maitch 20:14, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
- Comparing to featured articles such as Australia, Belgium, India, and People's Republic of China, I think something about the climate and foreign relations would be good. Topics such as culture, demographics, and government/politics seem underdeveloped. The introduction could also be expanded, and all but the most relevant templates at the end culled. — RJH 14:54, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
- My initial comments:
- The article should follow the basic article template design set forth in Wikipedia:WikiProject Countries.
- Etymology definitely needs a source, especially with the experts have two interpretations of the name (WP:AWT).
the Kalmar Union with Norway and Sweden, Finland. and and comma need to be switched around- WP:CITE should be used with the external link footnotes- {{Cite web}} might be useful here.
- Transnational Issues I in Issues should be decapitalized per WP:MOS, and would be better off in prose and probably could be moved into a politics section.
- The unneccesary bolding of terms under Education should be removed.
- fulfil -> fulfill
- Scandinavian welfare model is too long, relative to the size of the other sections that should be expanded. Please use WP:SS for this section.
- The note under Economy should be converted to a WP:FOOTNOTE
- Miscellaneous topics should be incorporated into See also- see no reason why they should be separate.
- Categories should be alphabetized