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Denmark

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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it would greatly benefit from an outside perspective. Since the article was last peer reviewed a little over two years ag it has seen lots of improvements. In 2012 it had recently merged with the Kingdom of Denmark article. Recently there have been concerns raised on the talk page about the clarity of the article; since it deals with both Denmark (the country) and the Kingdom of Denmark (including Greenland and the Faroe Islands) some users have said that the topic can sometimes seem unclear. The main purpose of this peer review should be to address any confusion. Additionally, I feel the article is now much closer to becoming Good Article again, so it would be helpful if the reviewer could highlight any major areas for improvement generally.

Thanks, Hazhk ^{Talk to me} 23:08, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

Comments from LT910001

Hazhk, this is a well-written and quite comprehensive article, and I commend you and other editors for writing it. In terms of the good article review criteria, the major outstanding issue is the lack of citations for a large number of paragraphs. There is also some confusion, as you note, between "The Kingdom of Denmark" and "Denmark" here, and I suggest a single title is used to refer to Denmark - probably Denmark, as this is the WP:COMMONNAME and also the title of the article. Once this citations are dealt with, I suggest you deal with any issues in the context of a GA review, which in my experience is usually more active and more thorough. Some more specific feedback may be garnered by directly requesting comments from other Wikipedians involved in this article's creation, or posting at any relevant Wikiprojects. Good luck! --LT910001 (talk) 23:20, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the reply. I will make the changes you recommended. -- Hazhk ^{Talk to me} 16:59, 9 June 2014 (UTC)