Wikipedia:Peer review/Double bass/archive1

Double bass

General cleanup of the article in terms of style and other FA criteria, copyediting, etc. — ßottesiηi ^(talk) 21:40, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

• Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
• Take care of the huge amount of {{Citation needed}}s.

• Per WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.

• As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.

• The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.

• Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{Cite web}} and {{Cite book}} may be useful here.
• This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
• The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA.
• Thanks, AndyZ _t 22:07, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

• • Yes, we added all the citation neededs generously as an effort for the overall improvement in the future. — ßottesiηi ^(talk) 22:11, 30 May 2006 (UTC)