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List of Norwich City F.C. Players of the Year[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I'm planning to take it to Featured List candidates.

Please note there are two major drawbacks to the article that I am aware of and will address before it gets to FLC, namely I have no RS (as yet) for the list of winners (quite a problem, that!) and I have no source (reliable or unreliable) for the additional 10 Hall of Fame inductees from 2006, that may include some of the more recent winners of player of the year.

I welcome all your comments and suggestions, even if they mean lots of work for me.

Thanks,

Dweller 08:30, 9 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Personally, I would recomend List of Norwich City F.C. players of the year and Captains of Norwich City F.C. (and possibly Norwich City F.C. Hall of Fame although this includes managers) be merged into one article such as Norwich City F.C. players, the two sections can be placed under sections. I created Leeds United A.F.C. players and although I know it is no-where near FAC, I just feel it is better to have all purely player related information regarding one club on one page. This is just my personal opinion and a suggestion though. Chappy God's Own Country TC 12:42, 9 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. The problem you then prompt is POV inclusions of "notable" players. I think that for FA quality, a single-purpose list is best. A list article of all NCFC players isn't necessary, as we already have a Cat (Category:Norwich City F.C. players). Furthermore, these single-purpose articles work better with the FA main article. It'd be nice if I could get all of them to decent quality, making it a featured topic. --Dweller 13:19, 9 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not suggesting you create a long list comparable to that on Leeds United A.F.C. players. I just thought it maybe an idea to merge the two articles solely about Norwich City F.C. players into one article of that name that way users can read different information on the same subject in one place, however with the notability of each article they are easily notable enough to be their own articles. As I said this is just a suggestion from my viewpoint. Chappy God's Own Country TC 21:00, 10 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
OK. Cool. --Dweller 16:11, 11 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

NB The article has been renamed, following a suggestion at my talk page, to make the capitalisation more rational and consistent. It's now List of Norwich City F.C. Players of the Year. I see no need to rename this PR page, as the redirect works fine, but if someone disagrees, they're welcome! --Dweller 16:12, 11 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Describing Dave Stringer as the Only future manager of the club to have won the award doesn't look right when he is now a former manager of the club.
  • by submitting a paper slip to the club's Carrow Road offices, by email or by text - how do you submit a paper slip by email or SMS?
  • The list is introduced with Since the first award of the trophy in 1967, then proceeds from the 2007 winner, putting the 1967 winner last. That introduction would be better suited to a chronological list. Oldelpaso 08:58, 14 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Think you might have misunderstood the "by submitting" statement Oldelpaso. It's meant to indicate that you do one of the three things after each by, however I can see where the confusion comes from, minor re-write probably best to ensure other users don't mis-understand. ChappyTC 13:15, 14 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Useful comments. I also liked your amend to the article, Oldel. --Dweller 10:46, 15 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]


Thanks to all who participated. This PR is now archived, as the article has gone to WP:FLC --Dweller 20:18, 15 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]