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Stanley Tucci

I've listed this article for peer review because I expanded the career section of this page. I also added TV roles in the intro. Before my edits, the career section was quite short. I would also like to know whether the article would qualify as GA.

Thanks, Virin1009 (talk) 11:49, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Comments from L150

Good work on expanding this article. It still needs a bit more work to reach GA level. Some feedback below. L150 19:38, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Ensure lead section summarises article
• Avoid mentioning too many film titles - just list his more famous roles

1995–2004: Breakthrough

• First paragraph has no references
• Second paragraph also has no references
• Ensure references match what is being said, eg. "received six Academy Award nominations" - where's the source for that?
• Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
• Spelling error with "Tucci anoth Golden Globe Award"

2005–2011

• First sentence missing references. Merge this sentence with another paragraph.
• Third paragraph missing references.
• As these are some of his major roles, consider expanding the prose and go into more detail about his performances
• Film titles need to be italicized. (eg. Captain America: The First Avenger)

2012–2016

• Third and fourth paragraphs missing references
• Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
• All images could do with alt-text

2017–present

• First and second paragraphs missing references
• Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
• Merge some paragraphs together and keep them consistent